😀 I hope that when I find my life partner and get married, she also feels the same! 😛 😀
But anyways, thanks a lot for such lovely words of appreciation. 🙂
Take care 🙂
Words full of love and affection! Your better half is gonna be very lucky. There are very few men in the world who can express their feelings in such amazing words.
The writeups are excellent . keep up the good work !!!! God bless.
I guess each one of us has a romantic shade in us in varying intensities! 🙂
Thanks a lot for your super lovely words of appreciation! 🙂
May God Bless You and Take Care. 🙂
Kya baat hain!!!:D … awesome 😀
Ekdum jordaar maza aa gaya! 😀
Tumhare andar ke shayar ke saath fursat mei baithna ka mann kar raha hain!! 😀
Thanks a lot for your wonderful reply and appreciation! It means a lot! 🙂
Take care…
Hamare shabdo ka aisa asar,
Dikhati hain tumhare mann ki kadar,
Tumhare comment ne toh dil jeet liya,
Humein khushi se bhavuk kar diya.
Uss ladki ko toh aaj bhi dhund rahe hain hum,
Jis din naseeb mei likha hoga uss se bhi mil lenge hum,
Lekin behad khush toh aaj bhi hue hain hum,
kyu ki aap ke pyaar ke vaaris toh aaj he se ho gaye hain hum!
A small attempt of mine to reciprocate to your lovely response to my poem! 🙂
Reply to bas bahana hai, darasal apne aap ko sudhaar na hai,
Shabdon ke leheron ko kinare pohachana hai,
Din ho to suraj ki kirno ko bahen failakar samalena hai,
Raat ho to chaand ki roshni me taron ko dhundna hai..
Hawaye hai to uski jaadu bhari thand ko mehsus karna hai..
Baarish hai to uski boondo ko haathon me sambhaalna hai..
Nadiiyon ki gehraion ko chuu kar ubharna hai..
It na kyun likh raha hun, kyun ki apne aap ko sudhaar na hai.. 🙂
Itna to aap samaj hi chuke ho ki disha galat hai par wahan sahi hai,
kuch aisa hi hota hai hamare saath, ke likhna hai jald se jald par mudda kahi gumm hai….
Humari haalat kuch andheri k rikshawolon ki taraha hai Jaldi me to hai per jaana kahi nahi hai,
I apologies for my very lame writing on your blog… hehehe..
It makes me feel really nice to know that you could connect to my poem 🙂
Your appreciation is highly appreciated! 😀
I hope to post something new soon and would look forward to your comments on the same 🙂
May God bless U and Take Care.
Words can be so beautiful… This reminds me of seeing an artists work…
Do u like paintings? U might like to see this artist work. Look up for Puuung
Once again beautiful work
WOW! Highly enjoyed looking at that person’s artwork. It felt like seeing my feelings and thoughts that inspire my romantic poems come alive and take a pictorial form! 🙂
I wont be able to thak you enough for introducing me to puuung’s artwork! 🙂 🙂
And, it also gives me immense pleasure in knowing that my poem reminded you of those paintings 🙂
And also, I thank the Arien in you for the appreciation you keep showering on me! 😀
Take Care.
Heyyyy Param, it is such a pleasant surprise for me to see you here and read your comment! 😀
Thanks a lot darling for your sweet comment 🙂
I Hope to see you soon.
Take care 🙂
Thanks a lot for your kind words of appreciation. 🙂
I feel very happy to know that you liked the poem a lot.
And I sincerely hope that you find that special someone soon, about whom you mentioned in your comment 🙂
Take Care and Be Blessed.
-Vishrut
I think this is the most passionate expression of love that I have ever read!!!
You seem to be an extremely romantic and a passionate person!!
May I ask who is the inspiration for this poem???!!! 😉 hahahahha….
Anyways, great work and keep it up!!
Thanks a lot for your appreciation of my thoughts in this poem. 🙂
I guess, I could be labelled that way because most people who know me well personally tend to use the same adjectives for me as you used in your comment! 🙂 🙂
And, to answer your question, I think that “Some secrets are best if kept unsaid!!”… 😉 😀
Anyways, Thanks again for your feedback and I hope we can keep connecting in future too!
Take Care 🙂
-Vishrut
“Whoever makes you feel
that deeply and that intensely,
deserves to know how they’ve
impacted you.”
Wish you a soulmate who can connect with u the way u always thought about.
Your expression of each feeling is so deep and very well expressed.
So Mr.Arjun Parekh is as romantic as Krishna 😉
Keep writing.
I cant thank you enough for the blessing and amazing wishes that you have showered me with! 🙂
I hope that your good wishes for me soon become a reality! 😀
Yes, I AM A HOPELESS ROMANTIC!! 😀
I guess, being a Krishna fan…Krishna’s friend, one HAS TO BE ROMANTIC ATLEAST, if nothing else!! 😛 😀
Thanks again, for writing to me 🙂
Take Care and May Joy Be Unto You 🙂
–Arjun 😛
-Vishrut
Thanks a lot for showering me with so much of appreciation…I really am at a loss of words to reciprocate 🙂
It feels extremely nice to see your description of my thoughts in this poem as “mesmerising” and “splendid” 🙂
It shows how deeply you could connect and that makes me immensely joyful 🙂
Honestly, I am highly humbled 🙂
A big Heartfelt thanks for your good wishes.
May True Love Be Unto You 🙂
-Vishrut
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Omg vishrut…ur wiffey gonna b so blessed. .ny gurl wud love to hear such romantic words frm her Man.
😀 I hope that when I find my life partner and get married, she also feels the same! 😛 😀
But anyways, thanks a lot for such lovely words of appreciation. 🙂
Take care 🙂
Words full of love and affection! Your better half is gonna be very lucky. There are very few men in the world who can express their feelings in such amazing words.
The writeups are excellent . keep up the good work !!!! God bless.
Thanks a lot for such an amazing appreciation. Really nice of you to say that! 🙂
I am really humbled! 🙂
May God Bless You.
Take Care.
I never realised ur sooo romantic ur writing cld make any girl fall in love wid u d simplicity of ur words can melt d heart of any girl.
I guess each one of us has a romantic shade in us in varying intensities! 🙂
Thanks a lot for your super lovely words of appreciation! 🙂
May God Bless You and Take Care. 🙂
Kya baat hai sir, tere pyare shabdhon ne kiya aisa jaadoo,
Hosh khud hi ho gaye behosh aur dhadkane bekaboo…
Ek ladka hoke agar ye main likh aur mehsus kar sakun,
To zara soch wo khusnaseeb ladki ka to cheen jaye chain aur sukuun…
Hamare shabdh to sirf rhyme hote hai,
Par Sir…! Aap to Ustaad Gulzaar k bhi baap hote hai…
Cheers bhai.. Joordaar..
Vik
Kya baat hain!!!:D … awesome 😀
Ekdum jordaar maza aa gaya! 😀
Tumhare andar ke shayar ke saath fursat mei baithna ka mann kar raha hain!! 😀
Thanks a lot for your wonderful reply and appreciation! It means a lot! 🙂
Take care…
Hamare shabdo ka aisa asar,
Dikhati hain tumhare mann ki kadar,
Tumhare comment ne toh dil jeet liya,
Humein khushi se bhavuk kar diya.
Uss ladki ko toh aaj bhi dhund rahe hain hum,
Jis din naseeb mei likha hoga uss se bhi mil lenge hum,
Lekin behad khush toh aaj bhi hue hain hum,
kyu ki aap ke pyaar ke vaaris toh aaj he se ho gaye hain hum!
A small attempt of mine to reciprocate to your lovely response to my poem! 🙂
Reply to bas bahana hai, darasal apne aap ko sudhaar na hai,
Shabdon ke leheron ko kinare pohachana hai,
Din ho to suraj ki kirno ko bahen failakar samalena hai,
Raat ho to chaand ki roshni me taron ko dhundna hai..
Hawaye hai to uski jaadu bhari thand ko mehsus karna hai..
Baarish hai to uski boondo ko haathon me sambhaalna hai..
Nadiiyon ki gehraion ko chuu kar ubharna hai..
It na kyun likh raha hun, kyun ki apne aap ko sudhaar na hai.. 🙂
Itna to aap samaj hi chuke ho ki disha galat hai par wahan sahi hai,
kuch aisa hi hota hai hamare saath, ke likhna hai jald se jald par mudda kahi gumm hai….
Humari haalat kuch andheri k rikshawolon ki taraha hai Jaldi me to hai per jaana kahi nahi hai,
I apologies for my very lame writing on your blog… hehehe..
I just love this jugalbandi..
Cheers..
Vik
Its all good man, its all good!
No need for an apology 🙂
Cheers
very nicely written and a person in love can understand better the depth of your poem. Excellent!!!! Keep it up and post your new poem soon…
It makes me feel really nice to know that you could connect to my poem 🙂
Your appreciation is highly appreciated! 😀
I hope to post something new soon and would look forward to your comments on the same 🙂
May God bless U and Take Care.
And also, a very big thanks for subscribing to my blog! 😀
Wow…that’s a really nice poem…quiet deep must say…good to know that even these days someone can write so romantic lines 🙂
Thanks for the lovely appreciation 🙂
I am really glad you connect.
May God Bless You. Take care 🙂
Words can be so beautiful… This reminds me of seeing an artists work…
Do u like paintings? U might like to see this artist work. Look up for Puuung
Once again beautiful work
WOW! Highly enjoyed looking at that person’s artwork. It felt like seeing my feelings and thoughts that inspire my romantic poems come alive and take a pictorial form! 🙂
I wont be able to thak you enough for introducing me to puuung’s artwork! 🙂 🙂
And, it also gives me immense pleasure in knowing that my poem reminded you of those paintings 🙂
And also, I thank the Arien in you for the appreciation you keep showering on me! 😀
Take Care.
wow awesome very good u r of cours a good poet
– yours little bro Param
Heyyyy Param, it is such a pleasant surprise for me to see you here and read your comment! 😀
Thanks a lot darling for your sweet comment 🙂
I Hope to see you soon.
Take care 🙂
i love u VISHRUT BIG BRO
BIG BRO = B SQUARE = B*B
Hahaha…thank you my little brother!! Love you too!! 😀 🙂
good job👍
Thank you for the appreciation 🙂
I am glad you liked it.
Take Care 🙂
I just really loved this poem. . You wrote with your heart and it’s really heart touching and it’s feel me that someone will ever love me like this! 🙂
Thanks a lot for your kind words of appreciation. 🙂
I feel very happy to know that you liked the poem a lot.
And I sincerely hope that you find that special someone soon, about whom you mentioned in your comment 🙂
Take Care and Be Blessed.
-Vishrut
I think this is the most passionate expression of love that I have ever read!!!
You seem to be an extremely romantic and a passionate person!!
May I ask who is the inspiration for this poem???!!! 😉 hahahahha….
Anyways, great work and keep it up!!
Thanks a lot for your appreciation of my thoughts in this poem. 🙂
I guess, I could be labelled that way because most people who know me well personally tend to use the same adjectives for me as you used in your comment! 🙂 🙂
And, to answer your question, I think that “Some secrets are best if kept unsaid!!”… 😉 😀
Anyways, Thanks again for your feedback and I hope we can keep connecting in future too!
Take Care 🙂
-Vishrut
your poem bas tuje he chaahna chahu really very nice
Thanks a lot for your appreciation.
I am glad that you like it and could connect to it 🙂
May You Be Blessed With Passionate Love 🙂
-Vishrut
“Whoever makes you feel
that deeply and that intensely,
deserves to know how they’ve
impacted you.”
Wish you a soulmate who can connect with u the way u always thought about.
Your expression of each feeling is so deep and very well expressed.
So Mr.Arjun Parekh is as romantic as Krishna 😉
Keep writing.
I cant thank you enough for the blessing and amazing wishes that you have showered me with! 🙂
I hope that your good wishes for me soon become a reality! 😀
Yes, I AM A HOPELESS ROMANTIC!! 😀
I guess, being a Krishna fan…Krishna’s friend, one HAS TO BE ROMANTIC ATLEAST, if nothing else!! 😛 😀
Thanks again, for writing to me 🙂
Take Care and May Joy Be Unto You 🙂
–
Arjun😛-Vishrut
Dont just thank me…instead wish me the same.. 😉 😉
Of course…!!
I wish the same for u too! 🙂
Take Care 🙂
It seems like you might live this in your dream or in your thoughts which appears in your magical words..
“Teri ruh ko mere alfaazo se chhuna main chahu..” mesmerizing words !!
Splendid expression of love!!
May all your desires come true!!
Thanks a lot for showering me with so much of appreciation…I really am at a loss of words to reciprocate 🙂
It feels extremely nice to see your description of my thoughts in this poem as “mesmerising” and “splendid” 🙂
It shows how deeply you could connect and that makes me immensely joyful 🙂
Honestly, I am highly humbled 🙂
A big Heartfelt thanks for your good wishes.
May True Love Be Unto You 🙂
-Vishrut
It’s your kindness else you are more deserved person than this 🙂
After some pondering over what to say, all I could come up with is
THANK-YOU!!…a heartfelt thank-you! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Take Care and keep connecting 🙂
-Vishrut