Aabid Ki Farmaaish
At which point can a Lover be addressed as a Worshiper??!!
Can the longing for someone’s Love become so intense that it becomes Self-Mortification/Penance??!! 🙂
I hope you enjoy the Poem! 🙂
Glossary:
(Some of the words mentioned below have more than one meaning which varies in accordance to the context of its usage.
The meanings that I have mentioned below are in context to what I meant to express in the poem 🙂 )
Aabid : Worshipper
Farmaaish : A request that one is obligated to fulfill.
Mehek: Fragrance
Seher: Morning
Zehen: Mind
Nasihat: Advice
Riwayat: Tradition
Mukhtalif: Different/Dissimilar
Baaghi: Rebel
Tabassum: Smile
Shireen: Sweetness
Iztiraari: Restlessness/helplessness
Intezaari: waiting for someone
Shiddat: Intensity
Inayat: Blessing
Taabir: Interpretation/meaning of dreams.
Tyohar: Festival
Zeenat: Beauty/decoration
Nagme: Lyrics
Shabba: Night
Zikr: Remembrance/Mention
Ruhaniyat: Soulfulness
Ibaadat: Penance
Aameen: Amen
Vishrut Parekh's Scribbling Pad 
aap ki har AARZOO puri ho ye dua hai hamari yr throughs for yr life partner is such a fabulous
A big heartfelt thanks for your appreciation and for such a wonderful wish for me! 🙂 🙂
May You Be Blessed.
Take Care.
-Vishrut
wow
Thanks 🙂
Wow!
Kya baat hai! Wah Wah.
“Aabid Ki Farmaais” Ko Inayat.
Aameen.
Thanks a lot for your appreciation 😀
And a big Shukriya for your Inayat! 😀
May You Be Blessed.
Take Care.
-Vishrut
“Beautiful Poem ” The Individual that you are longing for must also be longing for you.. The key to everything is faith!!
Good luck in ur search and Keep writing ☺
It is so nice to think that even she must be waiting just as me! 🙂
Thank you for giving me a broad smile 🙂
And Thanks a lot for your good wishes. 🙂
Yes..I hope to keep writing and I also hope that you shall keep reading and connecting 🙂
May Peace Be Unto You.
Take Care.
-Vishrut
“koi pyar kare to uss jaisa” aaisa kahenge log…Aabid Ki Farmaaish hogi puri ye dua he hamari.
Inshallah you and your love be toegther very soon,Amen!
Very nice poem with deep meaning.
Keep Writing!
Thanks a lot for your appreciation 🙂
And a big thanks for your blessing and good wishes. 🙂
May Peace Be Unto You.
Take Care 🙂
-Vishrut
Dua karte hai ki is aabid ki farmaish jaldi hi poori ho. Very intense, passionate and romantic!
Aap ki duaa ke liye hum aabhari hai 🙂
Shukriya 🙂
It feels amazing to know that you could connect so well and feel the essence of the poem 🙂
Keep Connecting.
May You Be Blessed.
Take Care. 🙂
-Vishrut
Very profound…nicely written.
Thanks a lot for your sweet words of appreciation 🙂
May You Be Blessed.
Take Care 🙂
-Vishrut
Hey Buddy…….that was reeaallly deep!
To be able to reach such depths of emotions and feelings is itself a big thing…..
And after that to be able to express and convey that depth so beautifully and easily, HATS OFF TO YOU MAN!!
I was a pleasure reading this poem…and I am surely going to read your other poems and writings…
Thanks for sharing this with us. 🙂
Thanks a lot for such beautiful words of appreciation. 🙂
Its a pleasure to know that you were able to connect so well to the emotions that I tried to express 🙂
I am humbled! 🙂
And its so nice of you to show your interest in going through my other postings…
I hope that you would keep sharing your further feedback as and when you read other posts 🙂
Thanks again.
May Peace BE Unto You.
Take Care 🙂
-Vishrut
Mesmerising!!!
Humbled! 🙂
Thanks.
May Joy BE Unto You.
Take Care 🙂
-Vishrut
An Absolutly amazing piece of art !!
I am glad I came across your website.
Keep up the good work!
I am highly humbled by the way you have expressed your appreciation and I thank you for the same 🙂
I am also equally glad that we could connect and I hope we keep connecting in future too 🙂
Take Care.
-Vishrut
your poem touched my heart…..
it is so BEAUTIFUL!!
Your girl would be lucky to have you!
I am really happy that my poem had such a beautiful effect on you! 🙂
It is really sweet of you to say all that you did, Thank You. 🙂
Take Care.
-Vishrut
Well expressed
Thank You. 🙂
-Vishrut
I couldn’t read beyond the first para
Hardly into the second…I was With a smile swimming in my own river….
but when I was able to disconnect myself n made myself to believe it is you and your own feelings, and when I read it completely I could only pray with you , may be not with as much passion but.. Could Connect again n feel Happy
A hope became assurance
I am speechless and super humbled!
🙂 🙂 🙂
Thank you and May Peace Be Unto You 🙂
All the Best 🙂
-Vishrut
Dear Vishrut…
Wow what a worshiping expressions..very heart worming and soul touching words..i have enjoyed and enjoying it….some poems are combinations of mere words, and some are expressions of the soul…ur’s are the 2nd type..
aap ke har shabd aap ke dil ki dhadkan lagte hai,
jise aapne sapne kaha, wahi to aapke apne lagte hai,
hum bhi haath uthakar, mangege ishwarse,
ki kubool ho jaye aapke dil ki har khwahish..
aur kainat bhi jud jaye puri karne aabid(aapki) farmaish..
When I read your comment, I felt a gush of good wishes flowing towards me…I really did feel that! 🙂 🙂
The kind of apprecation you have showered on me is so deeply humbling that it leaves me speechless! 🙂
It is an absolutely unadulterated form of pure pleasure that I experience when someone is able to connect to my thoughts in such a strong and beautiful manner! 🙂 🙂
And I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this pleasure 🙂
Jin Farishto ka zikr humne kiya thha,
Khudah tak sifarish pahuche woh zimma diya tha,
Lagta hai ki woh kaam ab ho gaya hain,
Kyuki insaani roop mei farishta(aap) humein dikh gaya hai.
🙂 🙂 🙂
I am extremely grateful to you for your prayers and good wishes for me. 🙂
And a big heartfelt thanks for sharing your thoughts with me in such a thoughtful and beautiful manner. 🙂
May You Be Blessed.
Take Care.
-Vishrut
I tried, but failed to control to reply back… your very pleasureful response to my comment. I dont know how could i be farishta !!! i am just a simple human being, but if i could be helpful i would love to be…
I enjoy all your write ups..every para..line..sentences..words..keep it up…
I genuinely believe that any human being who selflessly and without any ulterior motive decides to genuienely help or pray for or do good…for another living being is no less than an Angel (Farishta) in todays Kalyug that we live in! 🙂
I am really glad that you gave in into your urge to respond 🙂
And, the pleasure is all mine when you enjoy my thoughts and writing. 🙂
So, I hope you keep on enjoying it so that I can also keep getting this pleasure 🙂
Thank You 🙂
-Vishrut
Kya bat he ,kudrat bhi fida ho jaye aabid ki farmaish PE.Awsam .
Thanks a lot for your kind appreciation. 🙂
May You Be Blessed.
-Vishrut
Kudarat zaroor Kabul karegi Abid ki farmaish wah wah.superb.
May your good wish for me come true 🙂
And thanks for sharing your appreciation 🙂
Take Care.
-Vishrut
WOOOOWWW!!!!! … your poem made me daydream about how BEAUTiFUL it would be to have such person in life who would love me sooo passionately!!!!!!
I cn also only wish and pray that I get such a person in life……
It would be sooooo lovely to hear you yourself recite this poetry orally.
Would you make sound record and send me on email??? pls pls say yes 😀
I will send you email on ur id mentioned in ‘About author’ section of ur website and you snd me on tat email id of mine..pls I request!!…
Pls send me your sound recording of this poem and Bas tujhe chahnaa poem 😀
Thank you for sharing your such beautiful thoughts…….
God bless u…..
First of all thanks a lot for showing such amazing appreciation…it is overwhelming and highly humbling! 🙂 🙂
I hope and pray that you get the kind of lover that you dream of and I hope that you have made and evolved yourself as a person that would attract such a lover in your life! 🙂
About your request, 😀 :D…I really dont know what to say!!!… I am (almost) blushing!! 😀 😀
This request is such a sweet gesture from you… You seem to have retained your innocence and I would pray that it remains that way forever and your life partner cherishes and protects that in you! 🙂
Honestly, I am not sure if I would be able to fulfill your wish because I am feeling a little shy already even by thinking about this whole thing!! 😀
Although I am not a bad orator but my voice quality is definitely not upto the mark! 😛 and hence I am not sure if you would find the pleasure that you re seeking in my recital! 😛 😀
But anyways, for the sake of the sweetness and innocence in you, I would give it an honest try and if the result is good then I shall email it to you. 🙂
You please send me an email as u said and I shall revert back to that email of yours.
And…Once again I have to say that it was highly humbling to read your comment and its been a pleasure connecting with you. 🙂
Thank You. 🙂
May You Always Remain Blessed.
Take Care.
-Vishrut
You’re already in love with the ‘Idea of love’..
How eagerly he’s waiting for her!! Beautifully captured emotions, very touching!!
May you soon get your desired life partner!!
Dua karenge ki jaldi hi puri ho “Aabid ki Farmaish” !!
Yes…the desire is deep…to meet her..caress her…cherish her..
to drench her with the kind of love that I have brimming inside me! 🙂 🙂
Thanks a lot for your genuine heartfelt comment 🙂
Aapki duaa ke liye iss aabid ka dil-o-jaan se shukriya kabool kare. 🙂
I hope we keep connecting.
Take Care. 🙂
-Vishrut